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Thank you for the effort
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Yo Bro do take care! Don't over stress. |
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Bro Hard
Pls continue with more twist n turn before complete t puzzle. Am sure all bros n sis love this ride very much. Cheers.:D |
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must apologise again. Still cant finish my work today. Aim for tmr update
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but I really take my hats off for writers like BMW69 and coffeecans, who are able to post their stories almost on a daily basis, even amid their work |
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Camping...
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All the best in your own life ya! |
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Time: Friday night
Venue: Home 7.45 pm My mind was in a whirlwind after witnessing my wife’s infidelity. Totally shattered. For the past 3 hours, I was just driving aimlessly around in my car. I didn't know what to do and where to go. Why did Claire do this to me? She knew George was my nemesis in the office, yet she had given him a blowjob in his car on our wedding anniversary. So what should I do now? Confront Claire? After that? Divorce? Forgive her? I really didn't know what to do. I could overlook the incident with Raymond, but this time with George, it hurt me too much, too deep. I didn't know how I managed to reach home. My subconscious mind brought me back. Claire was home. Her shoes were at the shoes rack. There was an extra pair of shoes at our doorsteps. High-heels. Not Claire’s. Not sure who it belonged to. I opened the door. Claire’s sister, Carol was sitting on the sofa. Carol was Claire’s elder sis, aged 28. Their sisterly relationship was a very close and strong one, especially before their respective marriages. They used to share every little thing in their lives, including the most secret of secrets. In fact, even after marriage, they would still call each other on the phone almost every other day and update each other about everything, anything in their lives. Basically there were no secrets between the two sisters. I had always been amazed of how close they were. Carol-lookalilke http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uqwe1...ture=endscreen Carol was a very beautiful girl. Her face might not be as sweet and pretty as Claire but her body was one that every man would die for. My guess was a 34D-28-33. Hourglass. Had not seen her for quite a while so was a bit taken aback to see her at my house now. “Hi Carol, why are you here?” “Waiting for Claire to pack her stuff” Carol replied in a very curt tone. “Huh?” I was getting confused. “Packing her stuff for our Bali trip? You joining us?” “No Wilson. Claire is not going for the Bali trip with you. She is going to stay with me for the time being.” “What are you talking about? Where is Claire?” I was getting very confused and was feeling a bit frustrated. Here I was, feeling hurt by my wife’s infidelity earlier on, and now her sis was here talking to me as if I was a criminal and my wife was packing her stuff to leave home. What was the world coming to? I walked to our room and saw Claire packing her clothes into a luggage bag. Her eyes were red and swollen. “Claire, what’s happening?” “Nothing, you ask yourself” “What?” “Ask yourself what you have done.” Carol walked toward us and said, “Wilson, I didn’t know you are such a creep. How could you betray my sister? I am bringing Claire with me. You are not going to hurt her again.” My blood was starting to boil. It was Claire who did me wrong and now she turned around and accused me. “What are both of you talking about? What is it about me betraying Claire? It was Claire who betrayed me. Don’t think I didn’t know about you and George.” Claire looked up at me, her eyes first in shock and slowly turning into grief. Her tears rolled down. Carol was getting pissed as well, “Wilson what are you talking about? What’s up with Claire and George? Who is George anyway? It’s you who did Claire wrong. Don’t try to shift blame.” Claire totally broke down and cried, “Carol, stop asking.” My anger got to the better of me and I just blurted it out, “You ask Claire. Did she just give George a blowjob at his car just now?” “Wait wait wait, what are you talking about? Claire, what’s happening? Isn’t it about the affair that Wilson has with that lady, Jenny or something?” Jenny? I was getting perturbed. What was Jenny doing in the picture? I was getting real pissed by now, “What the fuck are you talking about? I was not having any affair. It was Claire having an affair with George!” Claire was in a total wreck now, crying profusely into her pillow and not answering me nor Carol. Carol walked past me and pushed me out of the room, “You get out, let me talk to Claire.” Carol closed the door on me. 8.15 pm After what seemed like eternity, Carol finally opened the door and came out to sit with me at the sofa. Carol laid down an envelope on the coffee-table in front of me. “Take a look at this. George went to Claire with these and told her that he had evidence of your affair with his wife, Jenny. He threatened to pass the evidence to your company, to the media and to sue you for having an illicit affair with his wife. That would make you lose everything, your job, your reputation.” I took the envelope and looked at the stuff inside. A piece of paper showing my hotel booking and payment record at Mandarin Oriental Hotel. That was my hotel stay beside the room of Raymond and Jenny. A photo showing me going into the hotel room 08-19. Date stamped and time stamped 8.15 pm. A second photo showing Jenny going into hotel room. Her room was actually 08-18, but in the photo, the last number was blurred, giving people an impression of room 08-19. Date stamped and time stamped 8.20 pm. A third photo showing Jenny leaving the room at 12.50 am. A fourth photo showing me leaving at 1.05 am. A fifth photo showing me at George’s and Jenny’s condo guardhouse. That was the day I sent the parcel with the Special Club invitation club to Jenny. There were another 3 more photos. They showed a man and a woman having sex at the condo. The woman was clearly Jenny. The man’s face could not be seen clearly but the camera purposely focused onto the watch on the man’s wrist. The same Patek Philippe I was wearing. This watch cost $120K. Not everyone could wear this watch. As I was going through the pics, Carol continued, “Claire tried to stop George from whatever he was trying to do with these evidence. In order to protect you, she gave in to George’s offer of giving him a blowjob. You betrayed Claire and she still did what she did to protect you.” I stared at the photos and took a deep breath. It was a setup. I had no idea how George had the photos of me and Jenny at the hotel and me at their condo guardhouse. But obviously he used all these and doctored the rest of the photos to make it as if it was me and Jenny having an affair. My lovely Claire gave the bastard a blowjob because she wanted to protect me. And she did that thinking I had done her wrong by having an affair with Jenny. My heart was totally pierced now. Why didn’t I have more faith in Claire? I could have confronted them and stopped the bastard’s evil plot. I just stood there and spied on them and being angry with my wife. I hated the image that was in my head right now. Claire’s hand covering her mouth which was full of George’s cum. I had the best wife in the world and it was me who subjected her to such a vulnerable position. I felt like dying. My heart was bleeding. For Claire. |
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What an unexpected twist! BRAVO!
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Now I'm bleeding mad with George. Should use Jenny to get back at him, but fuck his wife deep deep. And get Jenny to use a 15" dildo on that bastard. First try to get Wilson to cheat, and when he got cheated on, he freaking did this to Claire? F*cking ba5tard!! |
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It's amazing how you set out the little details in the early parts of your story like you having a Patek watch, the hotel room numbers and etc. I have to re-read your story in detail again to appreciate the finer aspects of the story.
Superb way of building up the plot and suspense. TS you must be a very talented and intelligent man in real life. Never seen such twists in sex stories before. Loved all three of your stories so far. Would love to meet you in real person if I have the chance. |
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A simple twist thats fore told why claire gave bj to george.bravo bro hadaway suspence on what goin to happen next?worth the wait.do update soon.tkc.
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