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04-06-2008, 12:47 PM
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Unexpected pick up.
The ride to nowhere
Well... my baby is in the workshop after a bad man slapped her on the side.. my poor baby...but it reminded me of a short encounter i had about year ago. i was driving home after work, 5.30 or so i recon, it was cats and dogs and traffic was slow. i was griving by some housing estates and i saw this girl walking in the rain. she was wearing a big oversized T shirt and hot pants. She was drenched, it was pouring and she was walking unsheltered hugging her books. she looked young, sec sch or so i gussed, but she had a sad look on her face.. well any woman walking in a rain alone and unsheltered to me looks sad anyways. i winded down my windows and yelled "Hey! you alright?" no reply from the girl. "HEY! Miss!" i competed with the insane volume of the falling rain. She turned and looked and stopped walking. i turned on my hazzard lights and stopped my vehicle causing a slight jam behind. "you alright?" i yelled "hmm!?..uh.. ya!" she yelled back almost inaudiable "hop in! you'll die of a cold if you stay out there!" i screamed she shaked her head "i'll give you a lift!" now i was panting from all the shouting she walked closer to my car and i had a clear view of her. her white T was soaked and you could see her skin from the drenched material. "its ok, i'll just walk back. its not very far." she replied to my previous sentence. "my dear girl, i am not going to do anything to you... just open the car door and hop...*HONNNNK*" the car behind was stuck and his horn couldnt have come at a better time. (anyways it was his fault, he tailgated me) she was pressured and just went with the flow and hopped in. i turned off the air con and searched for my demin jacket at my back seat. She was shivering slightly, goosebumps were all over her thighs... she had slim, fair thighs and she had well tone calfs, she had model legs. well my dirty thoughts aside, i covered her with my jacket and asked "where do you stay?" "well... i am not going home..." she spoken softly. "ok..... so where are you going?" i asked "i dont know..." she replied "lets go for a short drive." i recommanded and moved off. Well at first i wasnt sure, but she was tearing alittle. maybe thats why she was walking in the rain, to conceal her tears. to me, i treat younger girls like my daugther (although i am only in my early twenties) i rested my hand on her head and ruffled her hair. "you ok?" i asked her head lowered and sunk inbetween her shoulders. i rubbed the back of her head and neck. "just breathe slowly and relax." i coaxed she nodded. she was gona break... i could feel it. i had to stop it from happening... i hate women crying... "i read this in a mag once, it cures depression, insterested?" i smiled "umm?" she let out a sound "ok, put your hands above your head" i ordered "why?" she asked "it works, try it" i replied. "i dont want to.." her voice grew weak. "ok.. do this" i raised my hands above my head and my car drove out of lane abit. "CAR!" she yelled i yanked the steering and pulled my car back into lane. "ok you try" panting from all the excitment her arms rose into the air. "like this?" she asked "ya.." i giggled "i dont feel anything" she pouted "you sure?" still giggling like an arsehole "HEY!" she slapped my arm "stop laughing" she pouted again "i told you it works" i teased. She smiled and pinched me. "Ouch! you barely know me and you abusing me already...imagine what you'll do to me when i do eventually know you." sarcasticly i teased. "i dont care! you were mean to me!" she continued beating me. "i hate you! i hate you! I HATE U!" she screamed and bit me in the arm she was like an injured animal, frightened, shivering. tears rolled and drenched my sleeve as she bit me. she need an outlet and i gave her one. well a man can only take that much pain while driving. i turned on my hazzard light again and stopped by the side of the road . I ruffled her hair and caught her tears with my finger tips and kept quiet. __________________________________________________ _______________ ok, just to make it clear, before anyone accuses me of cradle snatching, she was 18, J2. 
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04-06-2008, 01:20 PM
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Re: Unexpected pick up.
nice story build up
 1st camper reporting!
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#3
04-06-2008, 01:24 PM
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Re: Unexpected pick up.
Bro Flavoured,
your threads are a must-read for me now... your embroglio is so very interesting... do continue and perhaps i should drive more often during rainy days... 
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04-06-2008, 03:30 PM
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Re: Unexpected pick up.
another great story coming up..
pitched my tent 
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04-06-2008, 03:50 PM
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Re: Unexpected pick up.
Please continue....
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04-06-2008, 03:52 PM
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Re: Unexpected pick up.
Woah Bro Flavoured, I'm pitching my tent here to show some support. Keep it up bro. Hehehe....!!!
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#10
04-06-2008, 04:10 PM
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Re: Unexpected pick up.
Hey Bro Flavoured, nice build up. Next time i will do the same as you too, that is if i have the same opportunity as you did,offer some dame in distress some ride.
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#14
04-06-2008, 05:16 PM
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Re: Unexpected pick up.
Quote:
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04-06-2008, 05:31 PM
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Re: Unexpected pick up.
Short update before i knock off
The ride home Guys are like that, no matter how much it hurts, we remain slient and bear the pain. i didnt regret it, but my arm bruised real bad after that. After 1/2 a song or so, her jaws released. i was wearing a polo tee and i saw the teeth marks... it looked alot worse i expected, it was like some wild dog had just attacked me (i am imagining, never got bitten by dogs before) "sorry..." she sniffed and rubbed her nose "feeling better?" i asked as i pulled out a tissue from the tissue box (Duh!? where else am i suspose to pull out a tissue from? my arse?) (sorry split personlity talking) "um.." she sounded nodding her little head "hungry?" i asked as i drove single handedly "not really... but i feel like ramen" she said "then ramen it is~" i yelp with joy. Ramen is my favourite food so, yeah~ as i was driving, she rubbed my arm (well bicep..or what little bicep i got.. well its the tricep now that i think of it) "did it hurt?" she asked with her big innocent eyes staring at my face. what is a guy suspose to say? i said what any self respecting man would "it hurt like mad! i thought you were gona rip my arm off!" i half joked she looked down feeling guilty "s.orryy.." she muttered i clamped my left hand around her neck and said "you should be! now you gotta be my left hand since its damaged" "hmm?" she queered "you gotta taked over the job of my left hand" i explained "oh.. how?" she asked "i'll let you know later" i teased. (and NO i masterbate with my right so no weird thought! yet..) i drove and reached my favourite ramen store. and throughout i was rubbing her neck. __________________________________________________ _______________ knock off, cya in abit
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